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If supervisors want to receive for respect their subordinates, they have to have some leading by examples.
>>If supervisors want to receive respect from their subordinates, they have to lead and show examples.
First, supervisors can communicate each other.
Communication is very important not only work but privacy.
>>Communication is very important not only for work but also for privacy.
Even though supervisors don\'t have deep relationships with subordinates, they always have to try talk.
>> Even though supervisors don\'t have deep relationships with their subordinates, they always have to try talking.
Supervisors have to check what is the trouble nawadays, how am I suppot he/she and am I advice anything? etc.
>> Supervisors have to check what the trouble is nowadays, how I support him/her and am I giving advice or anything? etc.Second, supervisors can suggest final goals and how can achieve.
>> Second, supervisors can suggest final goals and how they can achieve.
Also, if they have problems, they can guide how can overcome those.
>> Also, if they have problems, they can guide how to overcome those.
Finally, supervisors should give positism and always try to smile.
>>Finally, supervisors should give positivism and always try to smile.
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