homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Goodafternoon^^ I have any question. Well, Your comment is very good. But What is mean it is a correctiions and pronuncing, enunciation ? And Can I ask a favor of you? Our class using only English.
We try one thing or another it is photo pose. For example, I printing the project parer and it will run into effect after ten minutes. What able to with my reply about comperction re.. night? ther some highking understand.
I make used that run into effect.
Because there was a ring comfercetion. That useing the homework. ok? Did you have any plan for Today? I will go to the home of colleage. I will have part time. We make Wesday is family day. Wednesday is love family.
During Wednesday with show or love family. You mation colleage home. After class awere go to the colleage home. What do you mean by colleage home. I think My colleage home is smiple.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
1.A/ 2.B/ 3.C/ 4.B/ 5.A./ 6.A/ 7.A. 8.A/ 9.A/ 10.B/
See you Tormorrow.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
Thank you for doing your homework. I am really glad that you find time for you to do it. Nice job! If you are not sure with the words to use you can use the dictionary for you to express yourself more.I know you can do it! It will make your sentences more creative. It will really help you a lot.Good job!You tried your best to express yourself.You made me smile today. Let\'s talk more about your composition tomorrow.I have some questions about it.See you tomorrow^^Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
Goodafternoon^^
>> Correct!
I have any question.
>> I have a question.
Well, Your comment is very good.
>> Correct!
But What is mean it is a correctiions and pronuncing, enunciation ?
>> But what does it mean?Is it about the corrections on my pronunciation and enunciation?
And Can I ask a favor of you?
>> And can I ask you a favor?
Our class using only English.
>> Did you mean:During our class we will only use English.We try one thing or another it is photo pose.
>> Did you mean:We should try another thing like photos.
For example, I printing the project parer and it will run into effect after ten minutes.
>> For example,I printed my project paper and it will run into effect after ten minutes.
What able to with my reply about comperction re.. night? ther some highking understand.
>> Did you mean: What about my reply about your composition there are some words that are highlighted and I can\'t understand.I make used that run into effect.
>> I made use of the phrase run into effect.Because there was a ring comfercetion.
>> Did you mean: Because there was a ring for a conference.
That useing the homework. ok?
>> Did you mean: It is used in the homework.
Did you have any plan for Today?
>> Do you have any plans for today?
I will go to the home of colleage.
>> Did you mean: I will go to my colleague\'s home.
I will have part time.
>> Did you mean: I will have a part time job.
We make Wesday is family day.
>> We make Wednesday a family day.
Wednesday is love family.
>> Wednesday is love for family.During Wednesday with show or love family.
>> During Wednesday we show our love for our family.
You mation colleage home.
>> Did you mean: You mentioned about your colleague\'s home.
After class awere go to the colleage home.
>> Did you mean:After the class we will go to my colleague\'s home.
What do you mean by colleage home.
>> What do you mean by college home?
I think My colleage home is smiple.
>> I think my college is simple.
OR >> I think my college as my home is simple.HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:1.A/
>> Correct!
2.B/
>> Correct!
3.C/
>> B
4.B/
>> A
5.A./
>> Correct!
6.A/
>> B
7.A.
>> Correct!
8.A/
>> B
9.A/
>> B
10.B/
>> Correct!See you Tormorrow.^^
>>Correct!
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