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2013-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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1.The lecture was really boring. 2.It's been a tiring day-I'm really to go to bed. 3.That dinner was disgusted. 4.I was really annoyed with him for turning up late. 5.It was a shocked story. 6.He was very pieased with his results. 7.It was very embarrassed when I saw them togeter. 8.I loved the book and found the film very disappointed. 9.We were shocked to hear that she had died. 10.his reaction was embarrassed Dear Teacher Alice On february twenty sixth,I will go to the jeju Lotte hotel.I will sleep there. I will bathe in the hot spring,and I will go watch the fountain show.And I will go there for eat delicious food.so I don't meet you on february twenty sixth.I'm sorry.Iwanted you to go there.i will miss you.^^ from-talk about English,like a stupid tom^^::

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom!! A pleasant afternoon! Thanks for doing your homework! Oh but I don\'t like to read \"studpid Tom\". You ain\'t that kid? Don\'t say that again, okay? Anyway, thanks for letting me know about your schedule in advance! I will miss you more sweetie. Have a nice day and see you in class! ~Teacher Alice 1.The lecture was really boring. >>CORRECT!!2.It\'s been a tiring day-I\'m really to go to bed. >>CORRECT!! I really want to go to bed already. 3.That dinner was disgusted. >>That dinner was disgusting.4.I was really annoyed with him for turning up late. >>CORRECT!!5.It was a shocked story. >>It was a shocking story.6.He was very pieased with his results. >>CORRECT!! (pissed)7.It was very embarrassed when I saw them togeter. >>It was very embarrassing when I saw them together.8.I loved the book and found the film very disappointed. >>I loved the book but I found the film very disappointing.9.We were shocked to hear that she had died. >>CORRECT!!10.his reaction was embarrassed >>His reaction was embarrassing.Dear Teacher Alice >>CORRECT!!On february twenty sixth,I will go to the jeju Lotte hotel.I will sleep there. >>On february twenty sixth,I will go to Jeju Lotte hotel.I will sleep there.I will bathe in the hot spring,and I will go watch the fountain show. >>CORRECT!! And I will go there for eat delicious food.so I don\'t meet you on february twenty sixth. >>And I will go there to eat a delicious food .So I can\'t have a class with you on February twenty sixth. I\'m sorry.Iwanted you to go there.i will miss you.^^ >>I\'m sorry. I want you to go there too. CORRECT!! from-talk about English,like a stupid tom^^:: >> From: Talk about English, like stupid Tom^^.

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