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2013-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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It's New Year's Day. New Year's day is large holiday. On New Year's day,We eat rice-cake soup to signify our becomeing another year older.We doing New Year's Bow.All the family give word's of blessing.It's happy holiday. from-tom

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Good morning Tom! A happy Monday to you!^^ How are you feeling today? Thank you so much for allotting some time to share this composition to me. You just have to go over the corrections that I made to make your expressions much better. Thanks! _T.Alice^^ It\'s New Year\'s Day. >>Correct!New Year\'s day is large holiday. >>New Year\'s day is a large holiday.On New Year\'s day,We eat rice-cake soup to signify our becomeing another year older. >>On New Year\'s day, we eat rice-cake soup to signify our state for becoming a year older. We doing New Year\'s Bow. >>We do the new year\'s bow.All the family give word\'s of blessing. >>All the family members give their words of blessings to each other. It\'s happy holiday.>>It\'s a happy holiday.from-tom >>From:Tom^^  

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