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It's New Year's Day.
New Year's day is large holiday.
On New Year's day,We eat rice-cake soup to signify our becomeing another year older.We doing New Year's Bow.All the family give word's of blessing.It's happy holiday.
from-tom
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Good morning Tom! A happy Monday to you!^^ How are you feeling today? Thank you so much for allotting some time to share this composition to me.
You just have to go over the corrections that I made to make your expressions much better.
Thanks!
_T.Alice^^
It\'s New Year\'s Day.
>>Correct!New Year\'s day is large holiday.
>>New Year\'s day is a large holiday.On New Year\'s day,We eat rice-cake soup to signify our becomeing another year older.
>>On New Year\'s day, we eat rice-cake soup to signify our state for becoming a year older.
We doing New Year\'s Bow.
>>We do the new year\'s bow.All the family give word\'s of blessing.
>>All the family members give their words of blessings to each other.
It\'s happy holiday.>>It\'s a happy holiday.from-tom
>>From:Tom^^
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