Homework (266)
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- In your own opinion, do you think K-pop idols are happy with their fame?
I think they are happy with their fame. But there is a chance that they will be unhappy. It\'s because of Japan.
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~ T. Camille
- In your own opinion, do you think K-pop idols are happy with their fame?
>> CORRECT!
I think they are happy with their fame.
I think they are happy with their fame.
>> I think they are happy with their fame, but there is a chance that they will be unhappy. .
But there is a chance that they will be unhappy.
>> I think they are happy with their fame, but there is a chance that they will be unhappy. .
It\'s because of Japan.
>> CORRECT!
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