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I live in Seoul where is the biggest city in Korea but, actually I want to live in country side. First of all, big city is very crowded by cars, people and high buildings and that's the main reason why I don't want to live in Seoul. Of course, big city has many advantages about our life such as take easy for transportation, easy going to shopping. But, I think people who live in big city don't have take a rest during weekend not only adult but children. Some parents should go to work and children also go to many academies like play the piano, Taekundo or study for math and English etc. They are always busy and don't have time to talking each other. That's not a family. I don't want to those life. I agree that country side also has those problems but, maybe more weak than big city. I want to live small town near mountain, lake and sea. There is a peaceful and air is vey fresh.

Hi there! Happy Monday to you^^ I\'m glad to read your composition and I got your point. I think you are very much concern of having a family time. You\'re right actually. I do agree with the idea of living in a peaceful place with a family who\'s giving more importance than job. You\'re insight were highly appreciated . Good job. T. Jeny I live in Seoul where is the biggest city in Korea but, actually I want to live in country side. >> OR: I live in Seoul, the biggest city in Korea, but I prefer to live in country side.   First of all, big city is very crowded by cars, people and high buildings and that\'s the main reason why I don\'t want to live in Seoul. >> First of all, big city are crowded by cars, people and high buildings. Those are the main reasons why I don\'t want to live in Seoul.   Of course, big city has many advantages about our life such as take easy for transportation, easy going to shopping. >> Of course big city has many advantages in life such as easy transportation and near to shopping mall.   But, I think people who live in big city don\'t have take a rest during weekend not only adult but children. >> But I think people who live in the city don\'t take much rest during weekend not only adult but children\'s too   Some parents should go to work and children also go to many academies like play the piano, Taekundo or study for math and English etc. >> Some parents must go to work and children should attend academies for piano, taekwondo, study math, English...etc.   They are always busy and don\'t have time to talking each other. >> They are always busy and they don\'t have time to talk with each other.   That\'s not a family. >> Correct. >> OR: They are not acting like a family.   I don\'t want to those life. >> I don\'t want to live like that.   I agree that country side also has those problems but, maybe more weak than big city. >> I agree that country side has that problem but simpler than in the big city.   I want to live small town near mountain, lake and sea. >> I want to live in a small town near mountain, lake and sea.   There is a peaceful and air is vey fresh. >> There is peace and the air is fresh.