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If there is one[1] word that would best describe you, what would it be and why? Explain your answer in not less than 3 sentences. :)
I think the challenge would be one of the best describe me.
Let me explain it.
First of all, I love to experience new thing.
For example, I like to live another country or travel around the world or do scuba diving etc.
Also, I like learning something new.
My major is architect. So I need to have a wide range of knowledge.
That's why I studied about many thing such as English, Green Architecture, History, Economy(just a little bit..)
For these reasons, The challenge is best describe me.
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Hi there! :)
Thank you for sending me your homework.
Here are the corrections.
Please take note of your mistakes.
If there is one word I can use to describe you,
It will be SHY.
Maybe It\'s only for now because we just started with our classes.
I want to get to know you better so we can also enjoy during class.
See you later!
-T. WENDY :)
I think the challenge would be one of the best describe me.
>>I think \"challenge\" would be one of the best words that can describe me.Let me explain it.>>Correct
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>>> Let me explain why.First of all, I love to experience new thing.
>> First of all, I love to experience new things.For example, I like to live another country or travel around the world or do scuba diving etc.
>> For example, I like to live in another country, travel around the world or di scuba diving etc.Also, I like learning something new.
>>CorrectMy major is architect.
>> My major is architecture.
So I need to have a wide range of knowledge.
>>CorrectThat\'s why I studied about many thing such as English, Green Architecture, History, Economy(just a little bit..)>> That\'s why I studied about a lot of thinngs such as English, Green Architecture, History and Economy.For these reasons, The challenge is best describe me.
>> For these reasons, challenge is the word that best describes me.
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