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2013-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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If there is one[1] word that would best describe you, what would it be and why? Explain your answer in not less than 3 sentences. :) I think the challenge would be one of the best describe me. Let me explain it. First of all, I love to experience new thing. For example, I like to live another country or travel around the world or do scuba diving etc. Also, I like learning something new. My major is architect. So I need to have a wide range of knowledge. That's why I studied about many thing such as English, Green Architecture, History, Economy(just a little bit..) For these reasons, The challenge is best describe me.

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Hi there! :) Thank you for sending me your homework. Here are the corrections. Please take note of your mistakes. If there is one word I can use to describe you, It will be SHY. Maybe It\'s only for now because we just started with our classes. I want to get to know you better so we can also enjoy during class. See you later! -T. WENDY :) I think the challenge would be one of the best describe me. >>I think \"challenge\" would be one of the best words that can describe me.Let me explain it.>>Correct Or >>> Let me explain why.First of all, I love to experience new thing. >> First of all, I love to experience new things.For example, I like to live another country or travel around the world or do scuba diving etc. >> For example, I like to live in another country, travel around the world or di scuba diving etc.Also, I like learning something new. >>CorrectMy major is architect. >> My major is architecture. So I need to have a wide range of knowledge. >>CorrectThat\'s why I studied about many thing such as English, Green Architecture, History, Economy(just a little bit..)>> That\'s why I studied about a lot of thinngs such as English, Green Architecture, History and Economy.For these reasons, The challenge is best describe me. >> For these reasons, challenge is the word that best describes me.

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