Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Ely!
Thank you very much for making your homework.Please go over some of the corrections, and please feel free to ask me if you have any questions. Have a great vacation, Ely! Take care!
-Louise-
He intended to steal a car at the corner of an alley tonight.
>> Correct.
for the perfact success, he prepared some tools and looked into the surroundings of the area. He knew that it is a kind of crime, but there aren\'t any other choices to him.
>> For a perfect success, he prepared some tools and looked into the surroundings of the area. He knew that it is a kind of crime, but there aren\'t any other choices to him.
At that midnight, he finally committd an irretrievable behavior. And a few days later, it became one of the social issues such as the youth crime.
>> That midnight, he finally committed an irretrievable behavior. And a few days later, it became one of the social issues under youth crime.
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