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2013-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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He intended to steal a car at the corner of an alley tonight. for the perfact success, he prepared some tools and looked into the surroundings of the area. He knew that it is a kind of crime, but there aren't any other choices to him. At that midnight, he finally committd an irretrievable behavior. And a few days later, it became one of the social issues such as the youth crime.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Ely!

Thank you very much for making your homework.Please go over some of the corrections, and please feel free to ask me if you have any questions. Have a great vacation, Ely! Take care!

-Louise-

He intended to steal a car at the corner of an alley tonight.

>> Correct.

for the perfact success, he prepared some tools and looked into the surroundings of the area. He knew that it is a kind of crime, but there aren\'t any other choices to him.

>> For a perfect success, he prepared some tools and looked into the surroundings of the area. He knew that it is a kind of crime, but there aren\'t any other choices to him.

 At that midnight, he finally committd an irretrievable behavior. And a few days later, it became one of the social issues such as the youth crime.

>> That midnight, he finally committed an irretrievable behavior. And a few days later, it became one of the social issues under youth crime.

 

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