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I want to give advice anybody.example.....
1.You must watching touching movies and books.
2.Think about the victim's mind.
3.You don't watching violence movies.
4.You must take a positive of life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Giving advice would help others feel good and have a positive way of living.
Continue learning English for it enhances your capabilities and skills, but first of all, enjoy and have fun learning.
T. Alice^^
I want to give advice anybody.example.....
>> I want to give pieces of advice to everyone like for example...
1.You must watching touching movies and books.
>>you must watch touching movies and read books.
>>Think about others\' welfare.
3.You don\'t watching violence movies.
>>You should not watch violent movies.
4.You must take a positive of life.
>>You must have a positive mind.
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