Homework (269)
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- What are the advantages of learning from the study program?
I can learn many things. And that is helpful to school studies. So I can be a smart people so I can publish things about 5 subjects. And that will help me to go to good high school in the future. And that will make my parents to be happy.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking time in answering the question. Here are some of the corrections, but other than that, you really did great. :) Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ T. Camille
- What are the advantages of learning from the study program?
I can learn many things.
I can learn many things.
>> CORRECT!
And that is helpful to school studies.
>>That is helpful for my academics.
So I can be a smart people so I can publish things about 5 subjects.
>> I can be a smart person, so I can publish works related to the 5 subjects that will help me to do good when I go to high school in the future.
And that will help me to go to good high school in the future.
>> I can be a smart person, so I can publish works related to the 5 subjects that will help me to do good when I go to high school in the future.
And that will make my parents to be happy.
>> That will make my parents happy, too.
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