Homework!
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Q. What is your best way of relaxation? :)
A.
I have tough time nowaday. So I'm really exhausted..
When I feel tired, I usually take a bath.
It makes me feel better and relax.
After taking a bath, I sit on a sofa, watch some comedy show and laugh without thinking.
I normally have a nap out of my intention, during watch TV.
It's one of my favorite time in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji Ye!
Thank you for sending me your homework!
I do the same when I am exhausted.
And I also s[이름]p when watching TV.
Anyway, here are the corrections.
Have an awesome evening! :)
-T. Wendy
I have tough time nowaday.
>>I am having a tough time nowadays.
So I\'m really exhausted..
>>Correct.When I feel tired, I usually take a bath. >>Correct.
It makes me feel better and relax.
>> It makes me feel better and relaxed.After taking a bath, I sit on a sofa, watch some comedy show and laugh without thinking.
>> Correct.I normally have a nap out of my intention, during watch TV.
>> I normally take a nap out of my intention when watching TV.It\'s one of my favorite time in my life.
>>Correct.
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