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2013-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

학생이 쓴 원문

1) She [had lived] in Sweden before she went to Norway. (to live) 2) After we [had eaten] the cornflakes, Henry came in. (to eat) 3) Before Ken ran to Kerry's house, he [had phoned] him. (to phone) 4) After [had packed] they their rucksacks, they rode away on their bikes. (to pack) 5) Gerry helped his grandma in the house because his father [had telled] him so. (to tell) 6) The cat hid under the chair because the children [had been] so loud. (to be) 7) Before the students started to write, the teacher [had collected] their mobile phones. (to collect) 8) After Max [had finished] his breakfast, he left the flat. (to finish) 9) Laura repaired her glasses because her brother [had broken] them. (to break) 10) By the time the show began, all friends [had arrived]. (to arrive) Today,it was a long day.I was so busy and exhausted in my life. But I believe that tomorrow will be better. Just now, the clock's hour hand points at 1 Am. I think I had better go to bed now.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Nice job!!! You got 9/10! I believe success is something you make. Certainly others can help you, just as others can provide obstacles, but ultimately you make your own success. T. Rowena^^1) She [had lived] in Sweden before she went to Norway. (to live) >>correct2) After we [had eaten] the cornflakes, Henry came in. (to eat) >> correct 3) Before Ken ran to Kerry\'s house, he [had phoned] him. (to phone) >> correct 4) After [had packed] they their rucksacks, they rode away on their bikes. (to pack) >> correct 5) Gerry helped his grandma in the house because his father [had telled] him so. (to tell) >>Gerry helped his grandma in the house because his father had told him so.6) The cat hid under the chair because the children [had been] so loud. (to be) >> correct 7) Before the students started to write, the teacher [had collected] their mobile phones. (to collect) >> correct 8) After Max [had finished] his breakfast, he left the flat. (to finish) >> correct 9) Laura repaired her glasses because her brother [had broken] them. (to break) >> correct 10) By the time the show began, all friends [had arrived]. (to arrive) >> correct Today,it was a long day. >>It was a long day.  I was so busy and exhausted in my life. >>I was so busy and exhausted.  But I believe that tomorrow will be better. >>But I believe tomorrow will get better.Just now, the clock\'s hour hand points at 1 Am. >>It\'s already one o\'clock in the morning. I think I had better go to bed now. >> I think I\'d better go to bed now.

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