Homework#27
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HW#27 Why is English proficiency significant for you?
The reason why I made up my mind to study English at first is that I want to communicate with foreigns. But, now, I want to learn about other cultures. I think the learing English or other languages process have to be accompanied with understanding many situations in other countries and someone who study English have to be exposed to them. In this process, people can understand their cultures.
So, what someone is good at English is understanding English culture. That\'s why I think English proficiency is important for me.
To be honest, speaking English is so funny for me. If you\'re good at something funny, you know it\'s more fun.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jonathan. Thank you for this. I definitely agree with your last statement. If you are having fun doing something, it would be easier and much more interesting to keep doing it. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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>>> The reason why I made up my mind to study English at first is that I want to communicate with foreigners.
But now, I want to learn about other cultures.
>>> correct
I think the learing English or other languages process have to be accompanied with understanding many situations in other countries and someone who study English have to be exposed to them.
>>> I think the learning English or other languages process has to be accompanied by understanding many situations in other countries and someone who studies English has to be exposed to them.
In this process, people can understand their cultures.
>>> correct
So, what someone is good at English is understanding English culture.
So, what someone is good at English is understanding English culture.
>>> So, someone is good at English when he/she understands English culture.
That\'s why I think English proficiency is important for me.
>>> correct
To be honest, speaking English is so funny for me.
To be honest, speaking English is so funny for me.
>>> To be honest, speaking English is so fun for me.
>>> OR: Frankly speaking, I find speaking English fun.
If you\'re good at something funny, you know it\'s more fun.
>>> If you\'re good at something fun, you know it\'s more fun.
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