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- What made you interested in Math?
When I was in the 1st grade in Elementary school, I didn\'t like math. But when I was in the 2nd grade in Elementary school, I felt under the spell. But nobody released me from a spell. But as the school year progresses, I got interested in math.
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~ T. Camille
- What made you interested in Math?
When I was in the 1st grade in Elementary school, I didn\'t like math.
When I was in the 1st grade in Elementary school, I didn\'t like math.
>> CORRECT!
But when I was in the 2nd grade in Elementary school, I felt under the spell.
>> CORRECT!
But nobody released me from a spell.
>> Nobody released me from that spell.
But as the school year progresses, I got interested in math.
>> CORRECT!
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