Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What is the MOST valuable thing in life that you have right now? (:
The most valuable thing in my life is my smart phone.
I can't live without my phone...(Yes. I think I get a nomophobia which means no + mobilephone + phobia)
I do many things by phone such as video calling, playing game, listening radio and watching Tv show.
Also It's very helpful when I want to know directions ,how to get there how long it takes something like that. And I can get some information from the internet even I walking on the street.
That's why my smart phone is my most valuable thing in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi there.
Wow!
I was amazed bu your answer.
NOMOPHOBIA,
I never heard about that before.
I think that your phone is very helpful.
That\'s why you think it\'s important.
Anyway, here are your corrections.
Have a good nigh!
-T. WENDY
The most valuable thing in my life is my smart phone.
>>CORRECTI can\'t live without my phone...
>>CORRECT
(Yes. I think I get a nomophobia which means no + mobilephone + phobia)
>>Yes, I think I have nomophobia which means no+ mobile phone+ phobia.I do many things by phone such as video calling, playing game, listening radio and watching Tv show.
>> I do many things using my phone such as video calling, playing a game, listening to the radio and watching Tv shows.Also It\'s very helpful when I want to know directions ,how to get there how long it takes something like that.
>> Also,It\'s very helpful when I want to know the directions , how to get there, how long it takes, something like that.
And I can get some information from the internet even I walking on the street.
>> And I can get some information from the internet even when I\'m walking on the street.That\'s why my smart phone is my most valuable thing in my life.
>> That\'s why my smart phone is the most valuable thing in my life.
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