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2013-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Q. What is the MOST valuable thing in life that you have right now? (: The most valuable thing in my life is my smart phone. I can't live without my phone...(Yes. I think I get a nomophobia which means no + mobilephone + phobia) I do many things by phone such as video calling, playing game, listening radio and watching Tv show. Also It's very helpful when I want to know directions ,how to get there how long it takes something like that. And I can get some information from the internet even I walking on the street. That's why my smart phone is my most valuable thing in my life.

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Hi there. Wow! I was amazed bu your answer. NOMOPHOBIA, I never heard about that before. I think that your phone is very helpful. That\'s why you think it\'s important. Anyway, here are your corrections. Have a good nigh! -T. WENDY The most valuable thing in my life is my smart phone. >>CORRECTI can\'t live without my phone... >>CORRECT (Yes. I think I get a nomophobia which means no + mobilephone + phobia) >>Yes, I think I have nomophobia which means no+ mobile phone+ phobia.I do many things by phone such as video calling, playing game, listening radio and watching Tv show. >> I do many things using my phone such as video calling, playing a game, listening to the radio and watching Tv shows.Also It\'s very helpful when I want to know directions ,how to get there how long it takes something like that. >> Also,It\'s very helpful when I want to know the directions , how to get there, how long it takes, something like that. And I can get some information from the internet even I walking on the street. >> And I can get some information from the internet even when I\'m walking on the street.That\'s why my smart phone is my most valuable thing in my life. >>  That\'s why my smart phone is the most valuable thing in my life.

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