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There was one man. He was an understanding is many compared with someone. He was possessing many knowledges. He was kind to the people. He picks up the tissue falling in a street. And he concedes a seat to the man whose the body is uncomportable in a subway. I thinks that he is respected from someone and it is suitable. He is my husband. And I respect my husband. I thinks I woman of the good luck.

Hi [이름]JY^^ Thank you for doing sending me an inspirational composition today. You are really fortunate to have your husband.He is really a good person.I was really amazed by his actions. He is also concerned about the environment.Wow! You are really lucky!Great job! You were able to express your thoughts well and also during the class.You did your best! Keep it up! I am really glad about your improvements.See you!Have a fun day! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: There was one man. He was an understanding is many compared with someone.>> There was a man,he was really understanding compared to everyone. OR >> There was an understanding man who was compHe was possessing many knowledges.>> He posess a lot of knowledge about things. OR >> He is knowldegeable about a lot of things.He was kind to the people.>> He was kind to other people.He picks up the tissue falling in a street.>> He picks up tissue papers that fell on the street.And he concedes a seat to the man whose the body is uncomportable in a subway.>> And he offers a seat to a man whose body is uncomfortable in the subway. OR >> He offers a seat to the man who is not feeling comfortable in the subway.I thinks that he is respected from someone and it is suitable.>> I think that he is well repected by a lot of people and it is suitable for him. OR >> I think that a lot of people respects him and he deserves it.He is my husband. And I respect my husband. >> CorrectI thinks I woman of the good luck. >> I think I am a woman of good luck. OR >> Did you mean: I am a lucky woman.