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2013-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

First,I want to see you long time so,i will study online English. One hour,two hours,three hours...I will expand. Second,I will talk about you,and you will talk about me. I will say,"thank you""you are so pretty""you are nice"... And "do you love me?"I will ask with confidence.

강사 첨삭

Oh  my.... This is so sweet! I would also love to have class with you longer. If you ask if I love you, of course I do!^^ I love you Tom! Do you love me too? :) See you later cutiepie! ~Teacher Alice First, I want to see you long time so,i will study online English. >> First, I want to see you for a long time, so I will study online English. One hour,two hours,three hours...I will expand. >> One hour, two hours, three hours . . . I will extend my time. Second,I will talk about you,and you will talk about me. >> Secondly, I will talk abou you and you will talk about me.I will say,\"thank you\"\"you are so pretty\"\"you are nice\"... >> I will say, \"Thank you\", \"You are so pretty\", \"You are nice\"...And \"do you love me?\"I will ask with confidence. >> And I will ask \"Do you love me?\" with confidence.  

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