homework
학생이 쓴 원문
First,I want to see you long time so,i will study online English.
One hour,two hours,three hours...I will expand.
Second,I will talk about you,and you will talk about me.
I will say,"thank you""you are so pretty""you are nice"...
And "do you love me?"I will ask with confidence.
강사 첨삭
Oh my....
This is so sweet!
I would also love to have class with you longer.
If you ask if I love you, of course I do!^^ I love you Tom!
Do you love me too? :)
See you later cutiepie!
~Teacher Alice
First, I want to see you long time so,i will study online English.
>> First, I want to see you for a long time, so I will study online English. One hour,two hours,three hours...I will expand.
>> One hour, two hours, three hours . . . I will extend my time. Second,I will talk about you,and you will talk about me.
>> Secondly, I will talk abou you and you will talk about me.I will say,\"thank you\"\"you are so pretty\"\"you are nice\"...
>> I will say, \"Thank you\", \"You are so pretty\", \"You are nice\"...And \"do you love me?\"I will ask with confidence.
>> And I will ask \"Do you love me?\" with confidence.
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