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Classmates are important in our life because we're too much affected by them and it's true. So, most seniors recommend students to make a good friends in your school. We, Korea, have a perberb that when I want to know other person's personalities, try to meet he/she's friends. If I were a outgoing, I try to more meet outgoing people than introvert. People have a each personalities and they want to meet people who have similar with them. Especially, for adolescents, peer group's trend or style is important for their life. They are very sensitive and try to make a good relationship each other. So, I think classmates have stronger influence than parents. Students have more lean on their peer group than parents.

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Thank you very much for your composition. It is true that having a friend is important to everyone. I hope you have found a good friend that you can depend on. See you!

T. Jeny

Classmates are important in our life because we\'re too much affected by them and it\'s true.

>>Classmates are important in our lives because it is true that we will be affected by them. 

So, most seniors recommend students to make a good friends in your school.

>>So, most of the senior students recommend students to have good friends in school.

We, Korea, have a perberb that when I want to know other person\'s personalities, try to meet he/she\'s friends.

>>We Koreans have a proverb that when we want to know other peoples\' personality, we need to meet their friends.

If I were a outgoing, I try to more meet outgoing people than introvert.

>>If I were an outgoing person, I will try to make friends who are outgoing rather than with introvert person.
People have a each personalities and they want to meet people who have similar with them.

>>Every individual has his own personality and they want to meet friends which have the same personalties as theirs.

Especially, for adolescents, peer group\'s trend or style is important for their life.

>> Especially for adolescent and peer groups, trend and style are important to their lives.

They are very sensitive and try to make a good relationship each other.

>>They are very sensitive to try to make good relationship with each other.

So, I think classmates have stronger influence than parents.

>>correct

>>So I think influence from their classmates are stronger than their parents.

Students have more lean on their peer group than parents.

>>Students lean more on their peers or group than their parents.