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2013-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Hi sheela~ Why are you looking forward for this weekend? What's your plan on this weekend? I'm very curious. haha^^ Anyway, I want to ask something that I learned last night. What's the difference between following sentences. 1. I wanna live in another country. 2. i wanna live into another country. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Essay Question: Q. If you could change one thing about your childhood, what would it be and why? I regret that I didn't study English when I was young. If I could change one thing about my childhood, I would have been interested in English and studied hard. English is a language. I think that the earlier I am exposed to English, the quickly I could learn it, especially listening part. However I think that my English skill can be improved slowly but it's still not too late. Thanks. :)

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Good Evening Jane, I am looking forward for this weekend because I want to see my son. I haven\'t seen him for a while since my mother in-law took him last week. I really miss him so much. Anyway, I hope I have answered your questions. See you later! Here are my corrections! t. Sheela Hi sheela~ >>Hi SheelaWhy are you looking forward for this weekend? What\'s your plan on this weekend? I\'m very curious. haha^^>>Correct!Anyway, I want to ask something that I learned last night.>>Corect!What\'s the difference between following sentences. >>What\'s the difference between the following sentences.1. I wanna live in another country. >>Correct!2. I wanna live into another country.>> Correct! >>( There is not big difference between the two. When we say into this indicate movement toward the inside of a place while in indicate inclusion within space, a place or limits.)HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Essay Question:Q. If you could change one thing about your childhood, what would it be and why?I regret that I didn\'t study English when I was young. >>Correct! If I could change one thing about my childhood, I would have been interested in English and studied hard. >>If I could change one thing about my childhood, I would be interested in English and would study hard. English is a language. >>Correct! I think that the earlier I am exposed to English, the quickly I could learn it, especially listening part. >> I think that the earlier I am exposed to English, the quickly I could learn it, especially in listening part. However I think that my English skill can be improved slowly but it\'s still not too late. >>However, I think that my English skill can be improved slowly but still it\'s not too late.Thanks. :) >>Correct!

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