Homework.
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If you could do one thing over in your life, what would it be? (:
If I could do one thing in my like, I would travel around world with my family.
Because I love traveling and experiencing something new!
So If I have a lot of money and time, I just go somewhere and stay there one or two month. If I would do, I can feel and see their culture and learn many things.
I would be happy with my family.
That's why I would travel around world oneday.
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If I could do one thing in my like, I would travel around world with my family.>> If I could do one thing in my life, I would travel around world with my family.
Because I love traveling and experiencing something new!
>> Correct So If I have a lot of money and time, I just go somewhere and stay there one or two month.
>> So If I have a lot of money and time, I just go somewhere and stay there for one or two months.
If I would do, I can feel and see their culture and learn many things.
>> Correct I would be happy with my family.
>> I would be happy to be with my family.That\'s why I would travel around world oneday.
>> That\'s why I would travel around world one day.
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