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2013-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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If you could do one thing over in your life, what would it be? (: If I could do one thing in my like, I would travel around world with my family. Because I love traveling and experiencing something new! So If I have a lot of money and time, I just go somewhere and stay there one or two month. If I would do, I can feel and see their culture and learn many things. I would be happy with my family. That's why I would travel around world oneday.

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Hi! Thanyou for sending me your homework. How\'s your day? I had a great time in class tonight. Here are the corrections with your homework. I hope you have a good night _T. WENDY If I could do one thing in my like, I would travel around world with my family.>> If I could do one thing in my life, I would travel around world with my family. Because I love traveling and experiencing something new! >> Correct So If I have a lot of money and time, I just go somewhere and stay there one or two month. >> So If I have a lot of money and time, I just go somewhere and stay there for one or two months. If I would do, I can feel and see their culture and learn many things. >>  Correct I would be happy with my family. >> I would be happy  to be with my family.That\'s why I would travel around world oneday. >> That\'s why I would travel around world one day.

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