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2013-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Q. If you had only one day to live, what are the things that you would like to accomplish? A. If you had only one day to live, I would love to visit people who I love. First, I want to meet my parents and say "Thank you for raising me and Love you so much." After that I will meet my best friends and have a coffee and talk about our life. Finally, I will meet my boyfriend and be with him until I die. well.. It make me think much, It's a bit sad to think of it though.

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Hi there! A happy friday to you! A very good answer. Yes I think it\'s sad to think about it but sometimes you have to be prepared for what will happen. How\'s your day? I hope you enjoyed your Friday. See you later! -T. WENDY If you had only one day to live, I would love to visit people who I love. >> If you had only one day to live, I would visit people I love.First, I want to meet my parents and say \"Thank you for raising me and Love you so much.\" >> First, I want to meet my parents and say \"Thank you for raising me and I love you so much.\" After that I will meet my best friends and have a coffee and talk about our life. >> Correct Finally, I will meet my boyfriend and be with him until I die.>> Correct well.. It make me think much, It\'s a bit sad to think of it though. >> well.. It makes me think much, It\'s a bit sad to think of it though.

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