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2013-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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I'm very sad now.I want to cry.I don't have energy.... Teacher Alice1tou must say "We will see each other". Thank you very much,and most of all you will be in good health and you must happy. I want to you remember me. I will miss you.I will remember forever . I love you...

강사 첨삭

Ohhhh. This is the sweetest message I ever had. I love you too Tom. Please don\'t be sad... And please don\'t cry. I am pretty sure that your next teacher will be as good as me. She\'ll take care of you the way I did. Okay? I will miss you and I promise I will not forget you... I will remember you always and you will always be in my heart. I love you, Tom!^^ ~Teacher Alice I\'m very sad now.I want to cry.I don\'t have energy.... >> Correct! *Oh no...Teacher Alice1tou must say \"We will see each other\". >> Teacher Alice must say, \"We will see each other.\"Thank you very much,and most of all you will be in good health and you must happy. >> Thank you very much and most of all I hope you will be in good health and you must be happy.I want to you remember me. >> I want you to remember me.I will miss you.I will remember forever . >> Correct! I will remember you forever.I love you... >> Correct!

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