Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello There!!
Thank you very much for sharing this great story.
I am really touched! You are a good person.^^
I can feel that you are a person who can be trusted.
Again, thank you very much and have a nice day.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina^_^
I think I can explain myself by these three words.
>>Correct!!
I\'m not used to tell my story to others but I\'m a good \'listener\'.
>>I\'m not used to tell my story to other people but I\'m a good listener.
I used to listen carefully other\'s stories and agree with them and then, give them some advise or consolation.
>>I used to listen carefully to other\'s stories and I agree with them, and then I give them some advise or consolation.
So, a lot of my friends prefer to tell me their serious problems.
>>Correct!!
In addition, I never tell anothers their secret, so they believe me as a person who they can open their heart to.
>>In addition, I never tell other people\'s secret, so they believe in me as a true person whom they can open their hearts to.
Secondly, I\'m a \'humorous\' person. Although i\'m introverted at a first meeting, after being close, I like to tell them interesting stories and joke.
>>Secondly, I\'m a \"humorous\" person. Although I\'m introvert at first meeting; after being close, I like to tell them interesting stories and jokes.
And I\'m used to lead a atmosphere of the meeting. Therefore, people think me as a interesting and energetic person.
>>And I am the one who is used to lead a good atmosphere in the meeting. Therefore, people think of me as an interesting and energetic person.
Lastly, I\'m \'sentimental\'. My emotion is very fruitful. When I was teenager, I didn\'t know how controll my mind, so my feeling was changed a lot according to each situation.
>>Lastly, I\'m a \"sentimental\" person. My emotion is very fruitful. When I was a teenager, I didn\'t know how to control my mind. So, my feelings has changed a lot in a different situation.
After grew up, I can controll my emotion to some degree. Now, I don\'t used to express my feeling to out side. But I still have a emotional mind.
>>After I grow up, I can control my emotions to some degree. Now, I can control expressing my feelings. But I still have an emotional mind.
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