homework

2013-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

학생이 쓴 원문

1) The students have booked a flight to Vienna. (to book) 2) The cat has just caught a mouse. (just/to catch) 3) Jack and Brian had drown this picture. (to draw) 4) He have aleady invited his friends. (already/to invite) 5) Julia has made a table with three columns. (to make) 6) My friends had passed the Geography test. (to pass) 7) I have just fed the rabbits. (just/to feed) 8) The baby has drunk hedgehogs the water. They are sleeping now. (to drink) 9) The teacher has lost the keys, so he can't open the door. (to lose) 10) We had already downloaded the worksheets. (already/to download) Time flies so fast. I want to improve my ability to communicate in english with you. But I think that I have a difficult as usual. Sometimes I feel depressed and troubled myself. From tommorrow, I hope to have better skills and communicating abilities. See U at next our class...Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!!

Thank you for sending in your homework.

I really appreciate it.^^

To improve your ability in talking in English, you should build your self-confidence in talking.

Don\'t feel bad, because I believe in you and you should exert more effort if you really want to improve that ability of yours.

I am here to help you.^^

Have a great day and see you in class.

T.Rowena^_^

1)The students have booked a flight to Vienna. (to book) 

>>Correct!!
2) The cat has just caught a mouse. (just/to catch)

>>Correct!!
3) Jack and Brian had drown this picture. (to draw)

>>Jack and Brian had drawn this picture.
4) He have aleady invited his friends. (already/to invite)

>>He has already invited his friends.
5) Julia has made a table with three columns. (to make)

>>Correct!!
6) My friends had passed the Geography test. (to pass)

>>My friend have passed the Geography test.
7) I have just fed the rabbits. (just/to feed)

>>Correct!!
8) The baby has drunk hedgehogs the water. They are sleeping now. (to drink)

>>The baby hedgehogs have drunk the water. They are sleeping now.
9) The teacher has lost the keys, so he can\'t open the door. (to lose)

>>Correct!!
10) We had already downloaded the worksheets. (already/to download)
>>We have already downloaded the worksheets.
Time flies so fast.

>>Correct!!
I want to improve my ability to communicate in english with you.

>>I want to improve my ability in communicating in English with you.
But I think that I have a difficult as usual.

>>But I think that I still have difficulty as usual.
 Sometimes I feel depressed and troubled myself.

>>Sometimes, I feel depressed and troubled.
From tommorrow, I hope to have better skills and communicating abilities.

>>Starting tomorrow, I hope to have a better skills in communicating in English. 
See U at next our class...Bye.

>>See you in our next class. Bye!^^


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