Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi- Teacher Kristel~
Today lesson to describe a picture was a little bit difficult. I could not think out of proper words. And I didn't know how I have to describe.
Hahaha, I think I have to study English words.
I have a difficulty in having a class in our university these days.
The reason is that the classes are conducted in English. The teacheres are also foreigners. But althogh the lesson with you is not long, I think the class with you is very helpful to me. Thank you :)
Today's homework is to describe Mona Liza.
There is a woman sitting in the picture.
She has no eyebrow. She got a long hair.
She looks elegant.
She seems a little bit young.
It seems that she stares at me and smiles a little.
The background of the picture seems like a river.
The weather seems gloomy.
Thank you.:)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]~~~
A pleasant afternoon!
Wow! You did your homework really fast! Good job!kkk
Anyway, please check the corrections I made for you here.
Have a nice day and see you in class!
T.Kristel
Hi- Teacher Kristel~
>>CORRECT!!Today lesson to describe a picture was a little bit difficult. I could not think out of proper words.
>>Our lesson for today which is describing pict
And I didn\'t know how I have to describe.
>>And I didn\'t know how to describe a picture.Hahaha, I think I have to study English words.
>>CORRECT!!I have a difficulty in having a class in our university these days.
>>CORRECT!!The reason is that the classes are conducted in English.
>>CORRECT!!
The teacheres are also foreigners.
>>The teachers are also foreigners.
But althogh the lesson with you is not long, I think the class with you is very helpful to me. Thank you :)
>>Although my lesson with you is not long, I think that class is very helpful to me. Thank You :)Today\'s homework is to describe Mona Liza.
>>CORRECT!!There is a woman sitting in the picture.
>>CORRECT!!She has no eyebrow. She got a long hair.
>>CORRECT!!She looks elegant.
>>CORRECT!!She seems a little bit young.
>>CORRECT!!It seems that she stares at me and smiles a little.
>>It seems like she\'s staring at someone while smiling a bit.The background of the picture seems like a river.
>>CORRECT!!The weather seems gloomy.
>>CORRECT!!Thank you.:)
>>CORRECT!!
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