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2013-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Hi- Teacher Kristel~ Today lesson to describe a picture was a little bit difficult. I could not think out of proper words. And I didn't know how I have to describe. Hahaha, I think I have to study English words. I have a difficulty in having a class in our university these days. The reason is that the classes are conducted in English. The teacheres are also foreigners. But althogh the lesson with you is not long, I think the class with you is very helpful to me. Thank you :) Today's homework is to describe Mona Liza. There is a woman sitting in the picture. She has no eyebrow. She got a long hair. She looks elegant. She seems a little bit young. It seems that she stares at me and smiles a little. The background of the picture seems like a river. The weather seems gloomy. Thank you.:)

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]~~~ A pleasant afternoon! Wow! You did your homework really fast! Good job!kkk Anyway, please check the corrections I made for you here. Have a nice day and see you in class! T.Kristel Hi- Teacher Kristel~ >>CORRECT!!Today lesson to describe a picture was a little bit difficult. I could not think out of proper words. >>Our lesson for today which is describing pict  And I didn\'t know how I have to describe. >>And I didn\'t know how to describe a picture.Hahaha, I think I have to study English words. >>CORRECT!!I have a difficulty in having a class in our university these days. >>CORRECT!!The reason is that the classes are conducted in English. >>CORRECT!!  The teacheres are also foreigners. >>The teachers are also foreigners. But althogh the lesson with you is not long, I think the class with you is very helpful to me. Thank you :) >>Although my lesson with you is not long, I think that class is very helpful to me. Thank You :)Today\'s homework is to describe Mona Liza. >>CORRECT!!There is a woman sitting in the picture. >>CORRECT!!She has no eyebrow. She got a long hair. >>CORRECT!!She looks elegant. >>CORRECT!!She seems a little bit young. >>CORRECT!!It seems that she stares at me and smiles a little. >>It seems like she\'s staring at someone while smiling a bit.The background of the picture seems like a river. >>CORRECT!!The weather seems gloomy. >>CORRECT!!Thank you.:) >>CORRECT!!

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