Homework.

2013-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Who in your life would you like to forgive and for what? I would like to forgive one of my friends. She was my best friend. She is nice and funny. But She lied to me about something important, which makes me feel disappointed. So I've tried to avoid her. However, the time has passed and I'm alright about that now. So I want to say sorry to her and forgive what she did.

강사 첨삭

THUMBS UP! I am so happy bout your about your homework. This is a job well done! I am so proud. I hope you always do your homework this way. Enjoy your evening! _t.wendy ^^ I would like to forgive one of my friends. >> Correct She was my best friend. >> Correct She is nice and funny. >> Correct But She lied to me about something important, which makes me feel disappointed. >> Correct So I\'ve tried to avoid her.>> Correct However, the time has passed and I\'m alright about that now. >> Correct So I want to say sorry to her and forgive what she did. >> Correct

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