homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.I didn't bring my phone with me this morning,can i borrow yours?
2.I'm off now I have to fetch the kids from school.
3.I'll take the letter with me and post it while I'm out.
4.Yesterday, she forgot to bring her homework to school and came back upset.
5.I threw a stick for my dog to fetch
6.When you come, could you bring some wine?
7.My sister brought to the airport and saw me off and she 'll pick me up when I get back.
8.It takes me an hour to get home.
9.Take it over there ,please.
10.Bring it here ,please.
Dear Teacher Nina
Yesterday,The line is bad,and I will learn more about grammar,so you are fix my sentence,I study hard it.So I'm tired.ㅠㅠ
Today's homework is difficult.Could you give a few homework,Okay??^^See you later!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Tom^^
Thank you for doing your homework. Thanks for your feedback! Don\'t worry teacher will not give you a lot of homework. I hope that you feel comfortable during our class.If you have any questions,just feel free to ask me. You did a great job TOM^^ You were able to give me correct asnwers. Keep up the good work.Keep an eye on our goal.See you later in class! Can\'t wait to talk to you.Have a nice day!Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.I didn\'t bring my phone with me this morning,can i borrow yours?
>> Correct!2.I\'m off now I have to fetch the kids from school.
>> Correct!3.I\'ll take the letter with me and post it while I\'m out.
>> Correct!4.Yesterday, she forgot to bring her homework to school and came back upset.
>> take 5.I threw a stick for my dog to fetch
>> Correct!6.When you come, could you bring some wine?
>> Correct!7.My sister brought to the airport and saw me off and she \'ll pick me up when I get back.
>> took 8.It takes me an hour to get home.
>> Correct!9.Take it over there ,please.
>> Correct!10.Bring it here ,please.>> Correct!Dear Teacher Nina
>> Correct!Yesterday,The line is bad,and I will learn more about grammar,so you are fix my sentence,
>> Yesterday,the line was bad and I want to learn more about grammar so can you please fix my sentence.
I study hard it.So I\'m tired.ㅠㅠ
>> I study had so I feel tired.Today\'s homework is difficult.
>> Today\'s homework was difficult.
Could you give a few homework,Okay??
>> Could you please give a few homework?
OR >> Can you please give me a few homework?
^^See you later!!
>> Correct!
OR >> See you later in class.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.