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2013-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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If your life were a motion picture, what would the title be? A. If my life were a motion picture, the title would be "try and try again" I think It's better to regret doing something than regret not doing something. So If I decide to do something, I just start it. And I try to achieve that, even It takes too long time. It's same to study English for me :) So I will never give up studying English, and I will achieve my goal.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I like your answer. It\'s very inspiring! :) How are you? I hope you\'re  having a good evening. Here are your corrections. See you later! --T. WENDY If my life were a motion picture, the title would be \"try and try again\" >> Correct I think It\'s better to regret doing something than regret not doing something. >> Correct So If I decide to do something, I just start it. >>  So If I decide to do something, I just start with it.And I try to achieve that, even It takes too long time. >> And I try to achieve that, even if it takes a long time.It\'s same to study English for me :) >> It\'s the same as studying English for me :)So I will never give up studying English, and I will achieve my goal. >> Correct

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