Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
If your life were a motion picture, what would the title be?
A.
If my life were a motion picture, the title would be "try and try again"
I think It's better to regret doing something than regret not doing something.
So If I decide to do something, I just start it.
And I try to achieve that, even It takes too long time.
It's same to study English for me :)
So I will never give up studying English, and I will achieve my goal.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
I like your answer.
It\'s very inspiring! :)
How are you?
I hope you\'re having a good evening.
Here are your corrections.
See you later!
--T. WENDY
If my life were a motion picture, the title would be \"try and try again\"
>> Correct I think It\'s better to regret doing something than regret not doing something.
>> Correct So If I decide to do something, I just start it.
>> So If I decide to do something, I just start with it.And I try to achieve that, even It takes too long time.
>> And I try to achieve that, even if it takes a long time.It\'s same to study English for me :)
>> It\'s the same as studying English for me :)So I will never give up studying English, and I will achieve my goal.
>> Correct
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