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Continue to learn a lot of things for success is just a step forward.

Encourage yourself to go out of your shell to explore yourself in learning.

Success is one of the main goals of an individual but, is it enough....?

T. Jeny

To achieve success, we need not only hard work but luck.

>>correct

>>We don\'t only need hard work but also luck to achieve success.

>>To achieve success, we need not only hard work but also luck.

Korea has a saying that if we acheive success, we need 90% of effort and 10% of luck. 

>>Korea has a saying that if we want to achieve success, we need 90% effort and 10% luck.

>>There is a Korean saying that goes, we need  90% effort and 10% luck, to achieve success.

Rich people said luck is also important for seccess.

>>Rich people said that luck is also important for success 

Let\'s for an example.LG electronics company developed tablet pc 10 years ago. It looks like iPad.

>>For example, LG electronics company developed a tablet PC 10 years ago, that looks like an iPad.

But, people didn\'t understand why LG developed it, how they use it and why they buy it.

>>But people didn\'t understand how to use and why should they buy it.

Because laptop was famous at that time.

>>correct

People didn\'t have interest tablet pc. 

>>People didn\'t have any interest in PC tablet.

Finally, LG stoped to make it and perished.

>>Finally, LG stopped making it until it has gone.

I think it was good product but, it\'s too early time to understanding people.

>>I think it was a good product but it was release very earlt for people to understand to use it.

If it was developed nawadays, it may have succeed like iPad.

>>If it was developed nowadays, it might have been a big success like iPad.

To achieve success, time, luck and work is properly mixing.

>>To achieve success we need time, luck and hard work to properly work together.

>>Time, luck and hard work should work had in hand to achieve success.