homework

2013-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.Last week, I saw him walking to the church. 2.My father is often late for work. 3.He drove quickly to avoid being late. 4.I rarely play badminton with my sister. 5.this is the place where he fell down. Dear,Teacher Nina Thank you so much class yesterday! Start the class, I'm nervous. But I saw you are smile,my mind became relax**. And.. maybe your computer is broken,so we must check each other's computer^^ See you soon! With Love~~

강사 첨삭

Hi TOM^^ It\'s nice to hear from you today. I am so happy that you are doing your homework. Please go over the corrections below.Don\'t feel nervous before our class.Just be comfortable. I hope that you are enjoying our class.Thank you so much for your feedback, You are so sweet. I had a great time last night during our class.Have fun today.Nice job with your homework.Keep it up!See you later in class. Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Last week, I saw him walking to the church. >> Correct!2.My father is often late for work. >> rarely3.He drove quickly to avoid being late. >> Correct!4.I rarely play badminton with my sister. >> often 5.this is the place where he fell down.>> Correct!Dear,Teacher Nina >> Correct!Thank you so much class yesterday! >> Thnak you so much for the class yesterday.Start the class, I\'m nervous. >> Before we start the class I am nervous. OR >> I feel nervous before we start our class.But I saw you are smile,my mind became relax**. >> But I saw you are smiling so my mind became more relaxed.And.. maybe your computer is broken,so we must check each other\'s computer^^ >> Correct!See you soon! >> Correct!With Love~~ >> Correct!

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