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We can get a lot of lessons from other people or our friends. My boy friend is strong at the part associated with digital. He is always interested about new technology and digital stuffs. On the other hand, I'm a traditional analog person. Although using computer everyday, I don't know well about it. I often ask him to teach me about a structure and principle of computer. As he likes teaching someone, he always tell me about it in detailed. But I forget his lessons again all the time. Repeating these progress, I became to know a little about a computer system. Besides, he used to give me new information and news without my asking. He is taught how control his mind from me. His nature was hot and impatient at the first time we met but he's changing constantly since then. When he gets angry, I never push him and just wait for him until calming down without any words. Passed the storm, he realises that he was over emotional by looking at me.

Hi [이름]^^ I am so happy to receive a long essay from you.Great job! You did your best to expess your thoughts.Keep it up^^ If you find some words difficult for you to understand or you can\'t find the right word to use,find a dictionary and look for the synonym of the word. Building up your vocabulary is really good.If you have any questions about your composition just feel free to ask me during our class.Can\'t wait to talk to you again.Have a nice night!See you! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: We can get a lot of lessons from other people or our friends. >> We can learn a lot of lesson from other people or our friends.My boy friend is strong at the part associated with digital. >> My boy friend has a knowledge associated with digital stuffs. (Did oyu mean your boyfriend,lover or boy friend?) He is always interested about new technology and digital stuffs. >> Correct! On the other hand, I\'m a traditional analog person. >> Correct! Although using computer everyday, I don\'t know well about it. >> Although I always use computer everyday I still don\'t know well about it. I often ask him to teach me about a structure and principle of computer. >> I often ask him to teach me about the structures and parts of computer. As he likes teaching someone, he always tell me about it in detailed. >> He likes teaching someone,he is very detailed in telling information about it. But I forget his lessons again all the time. >> But I forget his lessons all the time. Repeating these progress, I became to know a little about a computer system. >> Repeating these process,I was able to know a bit about computer. Besides, he used to give me new information and news without my asking. >> Besides that,he gives me new information and news without me asking.He is taught how control his mind from me. >> He knows how to control his mind for me. His nature was hot and impatient at the first time we met but he\'s changing constantly since then. >> His personality was short tempered at the first time we met but he\'s changing constantly since then. When he gets angry, I never push him and just wait for him until calming down without any words. >> When he gets mad,I never push him to his limits and I just wait for him to calm down without saying any word. Passed the storm, he realises that he was over emotional by looking at me. >> Passed the storm,he realized that he was too emotional by looking at me.