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2013-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

학생이 쓴 원문

1) ox - oxed 2) roof - rooves 3) potato - potatoes 4) party - parties 5) deer - deers 6) chief - chieves 7) photo - photos 8) series - series 9) wife - wives 10) brother-in-law - brothers-in-law Hello,there. The weather in my city is a little cold. A light wind is blowing. But I feel the spring has been coming. Recently, The temperature is fluctuating a lot. So be careful not to catch a cold. Oh dear, It's the time for a lunch. I come close to forget it. I'm so hungry. I need to go fast to a cafeteria. Have a nice day! See you then.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Happy White Day^^

Are you done with your lunch? I hope you had a good one!^^

Thank you so much for finding some time to send in your homework.

Please go over the corrections below.

If you have a question, feel free to raise it in class.

See you!

_T.Rowena^^

1) ox - oxed

>>oxen
2) roof - rooves

>>roofs
3) potato - potatoes

>>Correct!
4) party - parties

>>Correct!
5) deer - deers

>>deer
6) chief - chieves

>>chiefs
7) photo - photos

>>Correct!
8) series - series

>>Correct!
9) wife - wives

>>Correct!
10) brother-in-law - brothers-in-law
>>Correct!
Hello,there.

>>Correct!
The weather in my city is a little cold.

>>Correct!

A light wind is blowing.

>>Correct!

OR >> The wind blows lightly.
But I feel the spring has been coming.

>>But I feel that spring is already coming.
Recently, The temperature is fluctuating a lot.

>>Recently, the temperature fluctuates a lot.
So be careful not to catch a cold.

>>Correct!

OR >> So be careful so you won\'t catch a cold.
Oh dear, It\'s the time for a lunch. I come close to forget it.

>>Oh dear! It\'s time for lunch. I almost forgot it.
I\'m so hungry. I need to go fast to a cafeteria.

>>Correct

OR >> I\'m so hungry that I need to hurry to the cafeteria.
Have a nice day! See you then.

>>Correct!

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