Homework.

2013-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Explain this quotation: Life is better lived when you enjoy it with what you have rather finding it in someone else Let me try to explain this quotation: "Life is better lived when you enjoy it with what you have rather finding it in someone else" I guess It means that We can be happy with being satisfed about what we have. Sometime we envy other people and thing which I don't have. It can make us unhappy. However, If we thank everything which I have, It make our life more grateful. So It's better to live when we enjoy it with what we have.

강사 첨삭

Your answers are very profound. That\'s another thumbs up for you. Thank you so much for showing me your effort. Here are the corrections. Enjoy your evening! See you later. -T. WENDY Let me try to explain this quotation: \"Life is better lived when you enjoy it with what you have rather finding it in someone else\" >> CorrectI guess It means that We can be happy with being satisfed about what we have. >> I guess It means that we can be happy with being satisfed about what we have.Sometime we envy other people and thing which I don\'t have. >> Sometimes we envy other people and the things which we don\'t have. It can make us unhappy. >> CorrectHowever, If we thank everything which I have, It make our life more grateful. >>  However, if we are thankful for everything which we have, it makes our life more grateful.So It\'s better to live when we enjoy it with what we have. >> So it\'s better to live when we enjoy life with the things that we have.

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