homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.He is listened to the song.
2.She has reading a comic.
3.It is rained a little.
4.She has been here.
5.He is written an e-mail.
"My Dream and My wish List"
Today, I talking about my dream and my wish list.
I want to become a Biologist.
I like all the animals,flowers,trees,sky,reptiles, and sea animals!!
It is more interesting to game,it is more fun to movie
강사 첨삭
Hi TOM^^
I am so happy to read about your dream and wish list.Being a biologist is really great.Learning about animals and different kinds of creatures is really fun.Let\'s talk more about your dream later.About your homework,I know you did your best.Don\'t worry teacher will explain it later in class.Jsut ask me question during our class,I would be glad to answer it.See you!Have a nice day!Take Care my dear Tom.
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.He is listened to the song.
>> He has listened to the song. 2.She has reading a comic.
>> She is reading a comic. 3.It is rained a little.
>> It has rained a little. 4.She has been here.
>> Correct!5.He is written an e-mail.>> He has written an e-mail.\"My Dream and My wish List\"Today, I talking about my dream and my wish list.
>> I will talk about my dream and my wish list today.I want to become a Biologist.
>> Correct!I like all the animals,flowers,trees,sky,reptiles, and sea animals!!
>> I like all kinds of animals,flowers,trees,sky,reptiles and sea creatures.
OR >> I like all kinds of creatures and plants.It is more interesting to game,it is more fun to movie
>> It is more interesting than a game and it is more fun than a movie.
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