Homework

Hi Teacher Kristel- I spent a happy time with my boyfriends today. Actually, I said to you that I would go to him secretly yesterday for surprising to him. But when I arrived his town, he said to me that he was at chiken restraunt with his friends. Although I went to him for about 1 hour and a half of 1 hour, I could not meet him. I was so disappointed to him and very sad. So, he went to me today although we had no plan to meet today, I spent very happy time. I hope you too spent a happy whiteday. Anyway,today's homework is to tell you what I think the sweetest gesture is. I think smiling to me is the sweetest gesture. When I am very strained, if someone smiled to me then I get to feel much more convenient than before. So, I also often smile to everyone to give them a positive energy. Thank you :)

Hello there [이름]!! A pleasant Friday morning my dear~~~ Thank you very much for this composition. By the way, I am so glad to know that you\'re boyfriend made it up to you eventually! I am indeed very happy for you~~~ ^^ Please check the corrections I made for you. Have a nice day! T.Kristel Hi Teacher Kristel- >> CORRECT!!I spent a happy time with my boyfriends today. >> What exactly do you mean here dear? >> I spent a happy time with my boyfriend today. >>I spent a happy time with my male friends.Actually, I said to you that I would go to him secretly yesterday for surprising to him. >> Actually, as I told you, I would go to him secretly to surprise him. But when I arrived his town, he said to me that he was at chiken restraunt with his friends. >> But when I arrived in his town, he told me that he was at a chiken restraunt with his friends. Although I went to him for about 1 hour and a half of 1 hour, I could not meet him. >> Although I traveled for about 1 hour and a half just to see him, I could not meet him. I was so disappointed to him and very sad. >> CORRECT!!So, he went to me today although we had no plan to meet today, >> So, he came to me today although we had no plan to meet today,I spent very happy time. I hope you too spent a happy whiteday. >> I spent a very happy time. I hope you too spent a happy whiteday, too.Anyway,today\'s homework is to tell you what I think the sweetest gesture is. >>CORRECT!!I think smiling to me is the sweetest gesture. >>CORRECT!!When I am very strained, if someone smiled to me then I get to feel much more convenient than before. >> When I am very strained and someone smiles at me then I get to feel much more comfortable. So, I also often smile to everyone to give them a positive energy. Thank you :) >>CORRECT!!