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2013-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

학생이 쓴 원문

1) on September 2) at 12 o'clock 3) in winter 4) on Easter Monday 5) on 4th July, 1776 6) on Christmas 7) on Tuesday 8) on the weekend 9) on my birthday 10) at the end of the week Hi,there. Did you see the sky? It was a nice sunny day. I'm really feeling that spring has been coming. Tomorrow is our happy weekend. Frankly speaking, This week has been so tight for me. But I did it and I will get the right to be relaxed on weekend. I work hard and energetically on week days. So, I will take a rest over the weekend. Had a good day, Rowena! See you then, our class.

강사 첨삭

Of course you deserve to rest this weekend regardless of how hard you worked this week.^^ 

Allowing your body to have ample rest and relaxation gives you more energy to start the week.

Enjoy the weekend!

Take care and always smile^^

Teacher Rowena^^

1) on September

>>in September
2) at 12 o\'clock

>>Correct!
3) in winter

>>Correct!
4) on Easter Monday

>>Correct!
5) on 4th July, 1776

>>Correct!
6) on Christmas

>>Correct!
7) on Tuesday

>>Correct!
8) on the weekend

>>at the weekend
9) on my birthday

>>Correct!
10) at the end of the week

>>Correct!
Hi,there. Did you see the sky?
>>Correct!

It was a nice sunny day.

>>Correct!
I\'m really feeling that spring has been coming.

>>I\'m really feeling that spring is here.

>>I really feel like spring is coming.
Tomorrow is our happy weekend.

>>Correct!
Frankly speaking, This week has been so tight for me.

>>Frankly speaking, this week has bee so tight for me.

>>Frankly speaking, this week has bee so hectic for me.
But I did it and I will get the right to be relaxed on weekend.

>>But I made it so I deserve the right to relax this weekend.
I work hard and energetically on week days.

>>Correct!
So, I will take a rest over the weekend.

>>Correct!
Had a good day, Rowena! See you then, our class.

>>Have a good day Rowena! See you then in our class.

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