homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.What time does he arrive?
2.Who did saw you yesterday?
3.What they want something?
4.What time does he meeting ended?
5.Why Pat does went home early?
PART 2.(My Dream)
So, when I Walking road,I see flower,cloud,ants.
They are curiosity's object.
So I must do 60%'s strive and 40%'s the dream.
I want to become biologist,so I try overcame the difficulties wisely
PS- teacher!homework is very difficult!!ㅠㅠ
강사 첨삭
Hi Tom^^
Thank you for sharing your dreams.^^ The homework was difficult? Don\'t worry teacher will explain it to you later in class.I will give you an easier homework. I am so happy that you are determined to be a biologist someday and you are doing your best in class.You are right you have to strive hard and dream for your future.it should be an inspiration for you.I know you can do it^^ See you later in class.Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.What time does he arrive?
>> What time did Harry arrive ?2.Who did saw you yesterday?
>> Who did you see yesterday?3.What they want something?
>> What did they want?4.What time does he meeting ended?
>> What time did the meeting end?5.Why Pat does went home early?>> Why did Pat go home early?PART 2.(My Dream)So, when I Walking road,I see flower,cloud,ants.
>> While I was walking on the road,I saw the flowers,clouds and ants.They are curiosity\'s object.
>> CorrectSo I must do 60%\'s strive and 40%\'s the dream.
>> So,I must strive sixty percent and forty percent for my dream.I want to become biologist,so I try overcame the difficulties wisely>> I want to become a biologist so I will try to overcome the difficulties wisely.
OR >> I want to be a biologist someday so I will do my best to overcome the difficulties that will come my way.PS- teacher!homework is very difficult!!ㅠㅠ
>> Correct!
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