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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay questions:
Q. Modern lifestyle mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A.
I somewhat agree that lots of children don't get less attention from their parents than children did in past. As the number of double-income couples increases, the time that they're spending together are absolutely decreasing.
I think that it does not mean that parents cherish their children less than in the past.
And, I don't think that it has a negative effect on children. If anything, children might think that what their parents do seems great. It could give children a chance of thinking about their dream, what they want to be, early.
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Hello Jane,
Good answer! I agree that some children can understand their parents situation but some also don\'t. Children in the past gets more attention from their parents that\'s why most of the kids before behave well comparing this generation. Parents should teach their kids a good foundation before letting them live on their own.
See you!
T. Sheela
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Essay questions:
Q. Modern lifestyle mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?A.I somewhat agree that lots of children don\'t get less attention from their parents than children did in past.
>>Correct!
>>OR: I somewhat agree that lots of children don\'t get more attention from their parents than chidlren did in the past. ( I think this is what you mean)
As the number of double-income couples increases, the time that they\'re spending together are absolutely decreasing.
>>Correct!I think that it does not mean that parents cherish their children less than in the past.
>>Correct!And, I don\'t think that it has a negative effect on children.
>>Correct!
If anything, children might think that what their parents do seems great.
>>For some othere cases, children might think that what their parents do seems great.
It could give children a chance of thinking about their dream, what they want to be, early.
>> It could give children the chance to think earlier about their dream or what they wanted to be.
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