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2010-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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War of flowers "Pibac" isn't title of game. Sometimes Korean play card game called "hwatu". That mean is war of flowers because flower picture prints on the card. "Pibac" is the cards combination for high percent of win. It is good cards combination like straight cards, 777 and Ace card. However "hwatu" is not traditional game in Korea. Ancient played a game of yut. Yut used to play new year's day. Anyway people like to play "hwatu". We used to play "hwatu" when gathered many people. People put little money for fun in Chuseok. But somewhere, some people put much money and then "hwatu" becomes gambling.

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Hello [이름], I enjoyed reading your article. I want to try that someday, hahah. See you tonight. Connie "Pibac" isn't title of game. >> “Pibac” isn’t a title of a game. Sometimes Korean play card game called "hwatu". >> Sometimes Korean play card games called "hwatu". That mean is war of flowers because flower picture prints on the card. "Pibac" is the cards combination for high percent of win. >> It means the war of flowers because of the flower prints on the card. >> “Pibac” is the card combination for high percent win. It is good cards combination like straight cards, 777 and Ace card. >> The good cards are the combination of straight cards like 777 and Ace cards.  However "hwatu" is not traditional game in Korea. >> However “hwatu” is not a traditional game in Korea. Ancient played a game of yut. Yut used to play new year's day. >> Ancients played a game called “Yut”. They used to play it on New Years’s DayAnyway people like to play "hwatu". >> Correct We used to play "hwatu" when gathered many people. >>  When people gathers, they use to play “Hwatu”. People put little money for fun in Chuseok. >> Correct But somewhere, some people put much money and then "hwatu" becomes gambling. >> In some places, people put much money and so it becomes gambling.

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