homework

2013-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ronnie

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Lucy has a dog. 2) Let's sing a song. 3) Emily needs a new desk in her room. 4) I need a blue pen. 5) Ben has an old bike. 6) Peter has an aunt in Berlin. 7) We listen to an English CD. 8) She has an exercise book in her school bag. 9) The speed of this car was 160 miles an hour. 10) They finished an unit.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss. [Name]!!!^^ That was almost perfect. But nenotheless congratulations still for getting nine out of ten. I hope you\'ll keep up the great job! Have a wonderful evening ahead. Teacher Ronnie ^_^   1) Lucy has a dog. >>CORRECT!2) Let\'s sing a song. >>CORRECT!3) Emily needs a new desk in her room. >>CORRECT!4) I need a blue pen. >>CORRECT!5) Ben has an old bike. >>CORRECT!6) Peter has an aunt in Berlin. >>CORRECT!7) We listen to an English CD. >>CORRECT!8) She has an exercise book in her school bag. >>CORRECT!9) The speed of this car was 160 miles an hour. >>CORRECT!10) They finished an unit. >>They finished a unit.

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