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2013-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Q. What's one thing you'd like to change about yourself? A. I would like to change my body. I am too short. So I always want to be taller. When I was young, My friend was kidding me because I was too short. And when I bought some clothes like a long dress or flat shoes, It didn't suit on me. Also I can not touch the thing which is on the top of the shelves. So If I could change about myself, I would like to be tall.

강사 첨삭

I know how you feel because I am also short. My dad is tall but I didn\'t inherit his height. I want to be tall too! My boyfriend is so tall and sometimes I can\'t reach his face. Anyway, here are your corrections. See you later. -t.wendy :) I would like to change my body. >> CorrectI am too short. >> Correct So I always want to be taller. >> So I always wanted to be taller.When I was young, >> Correct My friend was kidding me because I was too short. >> My friend keeps on playing a joke on me because I was too short.And when I bought some clothes like a long dress or flat shoes, It didn\'t suit on me. >> And when I bought some clothes like a long dress or flat shoes, It didn\'t suit me. Also I can not touch the thing which is on the top of the shelves. >> Also I can not reach the things which are on the top of the shelves. So If I could change about myself, I would like to be tall. >> So If I could change something about myself, I would like to be taller.

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