Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What's one thing you'd like to change about yourself?
A.
I would like to change my body.
I am too short. So I always want to be taller.
When I was young, My friend was kidding me because I was too short.
And when I bought some clothes like a long dress or flat shoes, It didn't suit on me. Also I can not touch the thing which is on the top of the shelves.
So If I could change about myself, I would like to be tall.
강사 첨삭
I know how you feel because I am also short.
My dad is tall but I didn\'t inherit his height.
I want to be tall too!
My boyfriend is so tall and sometimes I can\'t reach his face.
Anyway, here are your corrections.
See you later.
-t.wendy :)
I would like to change my body.
>> CorrectI am too short. >> Correct
So I always want to be taller.
>> So I always wanted to be taller.When I was young,
>> Correct
My friend was kidding me because I was too short.
>> My friend keeps on playing a joke on me because I was too short.And when I bought some clothes like a long dress or flat shoes, It didn\'t suit on me.
>> And when I bought some clothes like a long dress or flat shoes, It didn\'t suit me.
Also I can not touch the thing which is on the top of the shelves.
>> Also I can not reach the things which are on the top of the shelves.
So If I could change about myself, I would like to be tall.
>> So If I could change something about myself, I would like to be taller.
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