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2013-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Who wrote this book? 2.Whom are you going to recommend? 3.Whose dictionary is on the table? 4.It doesn't look like this is the right address whom did you ask for directions? 5.We have two extra tickets for the concert.Who wants to go with us? Part4. I want to become an explorer like a Brady barr. So I have a plan.It is i have pilot certificate. It because I want to guide my team comfortably. I ride an airplane at the high sky,then I will shout "we are go to the forest!" So my team have morale.Wow!!,imagination,I feel my heart is beat^^

강사 첨삭

Hi TOM^^ Wow! You want to be an explorer someday. I know that you will be able to reach your dreams because you are determined to learn about a lot of things. Congratulations! You did an awesome job! You got a perfect score! You were able to express your thoughts really well. Please go over the corrections I gave you.Just keep on dreaming and be inspired to reach your goals.See you later in class!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Who wrote this book? >> Correct!2.Whom are you going to recommend? >> Correct!3.Whose dictionary is on the table? >> Correct!4.It doesn\'t look like this is the right address whom did you ask for directions? >> Correct!5.We have two extra tickets for the concert.Who wants to go with us?>> Correct!Part4.I want to become an explorer like a Brady barr. >> I want to become an explorer like Brady Barr.So I have a plan.It is i have pilot certificate. >> So I have a plan and it is to have a pilot certificate.It because I want to guide my team comfortably. >> It is because I want to guide my team comfortably.I ride an airplane at the high sky,then I will shout \"we are go to the forest!\" >> I will ride an airplane at the height of the sky and then I will shout \"We will go to the forest!\".So my team have morale.Wow!!,imagination,I feel my heart is beat^^ >> So my team will have a feeling of morale .Wow! What an imagination,I feel my heart beats fast.

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