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2013-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dorcy

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I can't remember many things about my hometown. Because I didn't live long time. I lived just 2 years in high school student. But I like my hometown. My parents live there. So when I'd like to meet my parents i go to my hometown. Just reason, i like my hometown.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday! It\'s the middle of the week again. Just 2 more days and here comes weekends. Anyway, you did a simple but nice composition^^ Your reason why you like your hometown is a very good one! It must be very nice to go back from where you came from especially if your reason is to see the persons you love=) Well, job well done! I\'ll see you again! Take care and have a nice day ahead! ~Teacher Dorcy I can\'t remember many things about my hometown. >>CORRECTBecause I didn\'t live long time.>>Because I didn\'t live there for a long time. I lived just 2 years in high school student. >>I just lived there for 2 years when I was still a high school student.But I like my hometown. >>CORRECTMy parents live there. >>CORRECTSo when I\'d like to meet my parents i go to my hometown. >>And if I\'d like to see my parents, I\'ll go to my hometown.Just reason, i like my hometown. >>This is the only reason why I like my hometown.

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