homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.What did you have for dinner?
2.How much did it cost?
3.What did buy T-shirts?
4.What did you eat?
2weeks ago ,my salt water fish is dead.
It's name is Tomato clown fish.
It is very cute,and It ate many seed,so, I'm sad.
But my other fishes are health.And I hope I will buy another fish
강사 첨삭
Hi TOM^^
Happy Wednesday!! It\'s the mid-week!Oh,I\'m sorry to hear that one of your fishes died. =c The name of your fish is wonderful. who gave that name? It\'s okay to be sad but look into the brighter side that your other fishes are healthy. Cheer up! I am glad that you are doing your best everyday. You did a great job with your homework!Keep up the good work!See you later in class!Take care!Have a fun day!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.What did you have for dinner?
>> Correct!2.How much did it cost?
>> Correct!3.What did buy T-shirts?
>> What did he buy?4.What did you eat?>> Correct!2weeks ago ,my salt water fish is dead.
>> Two weeks ago,my salt water fish died.It\'s name is Tomato clown fish.
>> It\'s name was Tomato clown fish.
OR >> The name of my fish was Tomato clown fish.It is very cute,and It ate many seed,so, I\'m sad.
>> It is very cute and ate a lot of seed so I\'m sad.
OR >> It is very cute and ate a lot of seed so I feel sad.But my other fishes are health.And I hope I will buy another fish
>> But my other fishes are healthy and I hope that I will buy another fish.
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