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After the Industrial Revolution, destroying time of Earth is very fast because people's greed. People too much used natural resources and destroyed for making money. As a result, we now are faced with some serious situation like global warming or melting the iceberg. These days, we must use of recycling products. It's essential because it's kind of responsibility for our nature and descendants. Some people have prejudice about recycling products. But, its quality is good and cheaper than new. Once destroyed of nature, its recovering is very difficult so, we must try to our best for saving nature.

Hello [이름], Thank you for this wonderful composition. I hope that many people have the same thoughts as yours. It is indeed important to start recycling to help our environment. Here are the corrections I made for you. See you in class! -- T. Jeny ^^ ----   After the Industrial Revolution, destroying time of Earth is very fast because people\'s greed. >> After the Industrial Revolution, the Earth\'s destruction is very fast because of people\'s greed. People too much used natural resources and destroyed for making money. >> People used too much natural resources and destroyed them just to make money. As a result, we now are faced with some serious situation like global warming or melting the iceberg. >> As a result, we now are faced with some serious situations like global warming or melting of the icebergs. These days, we must use of recycling products. >> These days, we must use recycled products. It\'s essential because it\'s kind of responsibility for our nature and descendants. >> It\'s essential because it is our resposibility to nature and our descendants. Some people have prejudice about recycling products. >> Correct. But, its quality is good and cheaper than new. >> Correct.Once destroyed of nature, its recovering is very difficult so, we must try to our best for saving nature. >> Once nature is destroyed, its recovery is very difficult so we must try our best to save nature.