homework

2013-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

학생이 쓴 원문

1) What do you like best? 2) When does Bill get up in the morning? 3) Why don't you go by bus, Max? 4) What hobbies does Andrew have? 5) How do they go to every week? 6) Howold is Mike? 7) Whenis Susan's birthday? 8) Where are my exercise books? 9) What are you doing at the moment, Sally? 10) Where do the Robinsons live? HI,there. It's a sunny today. I really think the spring is coming, I feel so good becuase I slept well and I took a enough rest during my day-off. I already anticipate our class with you. I wish today's class is pretty pleasant. Somehow, I need to prepare today's class, reviewing our text book. Anyway, It's time to work now. Actually, I'm doing my homework secretly. See you then our class.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
A pleasant Thursday morning~~~

I am looking forward to speaking with you too.
I really enjoy having a conversation with you.
And I\'m glad to know that you had a good rest.
I hope you can have more day offs.^^
Have a stress-free day!  See you!

~~T. Rowena~~
1) What do you like best?

>>Correct!
2) When does Bill get up in the morning?

>>Correct!
3) Why don\'t you go by bus, Max?

>>Correct!
4) What hobbies does Andrew have?

>>Correct!
5) How do they go to every week?

>>Where do they go to every week?
6) Howold is Mike?
>>How old is Mike?
7) Whenis Susan\'s birthday?
>>When is Susan\'s birthday?
8) Where are my exercise books?

>>Correct!
9) What are you doing at the moment, Sally?

>>Correct!
10) Where do the Robinsons live?
>>Correct!
HI,there.
>>Hi there.
It\'s a sunny today. I really think the spring is coming,

>>It\'s sunny today. I really think spring is coming.
I feel so good becuase I slept well and I took a enough rest during my day-off.

>>I feel so good because I slept well and I took enough rest during my day off.
I already anticipate our class with you.

>>I already anticipate my class with you.
I wish today\'s class is pretty pleasant.

>>Correct!
Somehow, I need to prepare today\'s class, reviewing our text book.

>>Somehow, I need to prepare for today\'s class, reviewing our text book.
Anyway, It\'s time to work now.

>>Anyway, it\'s time to work now.
 Actually, I\'m doing my homework secretly.

>>Correct!
See you then our class.
>>See you then in our class.

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