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1.I don't know Peter's girl friend.Do you know her? 2.Where are the tickets?I can't find them. 3.We are going to the disco.Can you come with me? 4.I don't like dogs.I'm afraid of it. 5.Where is she? I want to talk to her? Parts5 And I want to go to the "Great barrier reef.The great barrier reef is in Cairns. I want to observe many corals and fishes at the great barrier reef. Now I breed salt water fishes.Start,the breeding saltwaterfish,I did't have learning ,so many fishes were died.But now my fishes and corals are healthy. Biology is a wonderful job.That is because that job can do all the activities. -continue...-^^

Hi TOM^^ Thank you for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job! You almost got a perfect score.Please review personal pronouns and don\'t worry if you have any questions just ask me during the class. A biologist is really an amazing job because you will be able to learn a lot of things.It is really fun. I hope to visit The Great Barrier Reef too.See you later in class.Enjoy the rest of the day!Take Care!Teacher NIna Here are my corrections for you: 1.I don\'t know Peter\'s girl friend.Do you know her? >> Correct!2.Where are the tickets?I can\'t find them. >> Correct!3.We are going to the disco.Can you come with me? >> us4.I don\'t like dogs.I\'m afraid of it. >> Correct!5.Where is she? I want to talk to her? >> Correct!Parts5>> Part 5And I want to go to the \"Great barrier reef. >> I want to go to the \"Great Barrier Reef\'. The great barrier reef is in Cairns. >> The Great Barrier Reef is in Cairns. OR >> The Great Barrier Reef is in Cairns,Australia.I want to observe many corals and fishes at the great barrier reef. >> Correct! OR >> I want to observe many corals and fishes at the Great Barrier Reef.(Proper Nouns should be written in capital letters.)Now I breed salt water fishes. >> Correct! Start,the breeding saltwaterfish,I did\'t have learning ,so many fishes were died. >> When I started to breed salt water fishes,I didn\'t have enough knowledge so a lot of my fishes died, OR >> When I started to breed salt water fishes,I didn\'t know anything about their life so a lot of my fishes died. But now my fishes and corals are healthy. >> Correct!Biology is a wonderful job. >> Biology is a wonderful subject. OR >> Biologist is a wonderful job. That is because that job can do all the activities. >> It is because the job can do all of the activities. OR >> It is because the job can do a lot of activities.-continue...-^^ >> To be continued..