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2013-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

1) What do you like best? 2) When Bill get up in the morning? 3) Why don't you go by bus, Max? 4) What hobbies does Andrew have? 5) How do they go to every week? 6) How old is Mike? 7) When is Susan's birthday? 8) Where are my exercise books? 9) What are you doing at the moment, Sally? 10) Where do the Robinsons live? Hi there. It's on happy friday. Pleasant weekend is coming. Actually, I have to do something in this weekend. I plan to go a hospital and my old wound get be healed. And then, I will meet my friends and we are scheduled to have a good time. Anyway, I wish you also have a great weekend. Relax and enjoy your holidays. Taking a rest well is as much important as working hard. See you then in our class. Bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

A jolly good morning to you!It\'s Friday again.^^

I hope you are going to enjoy your time with your friends this weekend.

Here are some corrections I made for you.

Please check them out. 
Enjoy your day and have a super cool weekend...!!!
~~T.Rowena~~

1) What do you like best?

>>Correct!
2) When Bill get up in the morning?

>> When does Bill get up in the morning?
>> Correct!
3) Why don\'t you go by bus, Max?

>>Correct!
4) What hobbies does Andrew have?

>>Correct!
5) How do they go to every week?

>>Where  do they go to every week?
6) How old is Mike?

>>Correct!
7) When is Susan\'s birthday?

>>Correct!
8) Where are my exercise books?

>>Correct!
9) What are you doing at the moment, Sally?

>>Correct!
10) Where do the Robinsons live?
>>Correct!
Hi there.

>>Correct!
It\'s on happy friday. Pleasant weekend is coming.

>>It\'s a happy Friday.A pleasant  weekend is coming.
Actually, I have to do something in this weekend.
>>Actually, I have to do something this weekend.

I plan to go a hospital and my old wound get be healed.

>>I plan to go to the hospital to get my old wound be treated.
And then, I will meet my friends and we are scheduled to have a good time.

>>And then, I will meet my friends and have a good time.
Anyway, I wish you also have a great weekend.

>>Correct!
Relax and enjoy your holidays.

>>Correct!
 Taking a rest well is as much important as working hard.

>>Taking a rest well is as important as working hard.  
See you then in our class. Bye~

>>Correct!

 

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