Homework 28
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Would you say that people who like gossiping do it because their lives are empty or because it is just a way of entertainment? Give some examples.
There are various reason why they are gossiping. For example if gossiper hate someone. It can be friends, colleagues and even family member.
The other reason is jealousy. once observing them, they seem to be not busy to their own. So they have a lot of chance for seeing others working. At the first time, they just envy someone's activity only. But it change as a bad feeling. Because if they talk with other's weakness once, it comforts them about their inferior complex.
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Would you say that people who like gossiping do it because their lives are empty or because it is just a way of entertainment? Give some examples.There are various reason why they are gossiping.
>>correct
OR: There are various reasons why they gossip.
For example if gossiper hate someone. >>For example if the gossiper hates someone.
It can be friends, colleagues and even family member.>>They can be our friends, colleagues and even family members.The other reason is jealousy.
>>correct
once observing them, they seem to be not busy to their own.
>>Once you have observed them, they seem to be not busy on their own lives.
So they have a lot of chance for seeing others working.
>>So they have a lot of chance to see other people\'s mistake.
At the first time, they just envy someone\'s activity only.
>>correctAt first, they may envy someone\'s actions.
But it change as a bad feeling.
>>But it cold lead to a bad feeling.
Because if they talk with other\'s weakness once, it comforts them about their inferior complex.
>>correct
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