homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.This is [Name]. He's a doctor.
2.Peter is An engineer.
3.That's Oliver.He's a travel agent.
4.Leonardo di Caprio is an actor.
5.Fred is an electrician.
Dear teacher Nina
Teacher Nina! I think that teacher and I met is luck!
It is because you always smile and you alwaya teaching me softly.
I have to a class with you. You always fix my sentence,so i feel confidence about the English.
Today my mom said"Tom wants to have a class with teacher Nina"to the manager.
korean manager said "At the Philippines don't watch renewal class"
So...You should lead me. Teacher Nina I like you^^!!
With Love Tom
강사 첨삭
Hi Adorable TOM^^
HAPPY FRIDAY^^Congratulations! You got a perfect score with the articles. It is easy right? I think we can now move on to another kind of homework.Don\'t worry it will really help you improve your skills.You\'re so sweet Tom.^^ Thank you for being a good student of mine. I am always here to help you improve your skills.Don\'t be discouraged TOM^^ We are not sure about our schedule let us just hope that we will still see each other.Think positive my dearest TOM^^ For your skils,let\'s take it one step at a time.I know you can do it^^See you later in class!Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.This is [Name]. He\'s a doctor.
>> Correct!2.Peter is An engineer.
>> Correct!3.That\'s Oliver.He\'s a travel agent.
>> Correct!4.Leonardo di Caprio is an actor.
>> Correct!5.Fred is an electrician.>> Correct!Dear teacher Nina>> Correct!Teacher Nina! I think that teacher and I met is luck!
>> Teacher Nina! I think that you and I met was a luck!It is because you always smile and you alwaya teaching me softly.
>> It is because you always smile and you teach me softly.
OR >> Did you mean: It is because you always smile and you teach me slowly.I have to a class with you.
>> I have to do a class with you.
You always fix my sentence,so i feel confidence about the English.
>> You always fix my sentence,so I feel confident with English.Today my mom said\"Tom wants to have a class with teacher Nina\"to the manager.
>> Correct!
OR >> Today my mom said\"Tom wants to have a class with teacher Nina\"to the Korean manager.korean manager said \"At the Philippines don\'t watch renewal class\"
>> The Korean manager said \" Teachers are not aware of their schedule of classes.\"So...You should lead me.
>> Correct!
Teacher Nina I like you^^!!
>> Correct!With Love Tom
>> Correct!
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