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2013-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.This is [Name]. He's a doctor. 2.Peter is An engineer. 3.That's Oliver.He's a travel agent. 4.Leonardo di Caprio is an actor. 5.Fred is an electrician. Dear teacher Nina Teacher Nina! I think that teacher and I met is luck! It is because you always smile and you alwaya teaching me softly. I have to a class with you. You always fix my sentence,so i feel confidence about the English. Today my mom said"Tom wants to have a class with teacher Nina"to the manager. korean manager said "At the Philippines don't watch renewal class" So...You should lead me. Teacher Nina I like you^^!! With Love Tom

강사 첨삭

Hi Adorable TOM^^ HAPPY FRIDAY^^Congratulations! You got a perfect score with the articles. It is easy right? I think we can now move on to another kind of homework.Don\'t worry it will really help you improve your skills.You\'re so sweet Tom.^^ Thank you for being a good student of mine. I am always here to help you improve your skills.Don\'t be discouraged TOM^^ We are not sure about our schedule let us just hope that we will still see each other.Think positive my dearest TOM^^ For your skils,let\'s take it one step at a time.I know you can do it^^See you later in class!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.This is [Name]. He\'s a doctor. >> Correct!2.Peter is An engineer. >> Correct!3.That\'s Oliver.He\'s a travel agent. >> Correct!4.Leonardo di Caprio is an actor. >> Correct!5.Fred is an electrician.>> Correct!Dear teacher Nina>> Correct!Teacher Nina! I think that teacher and I met is luck! >> Teacher Nina! I think that you and I met was a luck!It is because you always smile and you alwaya teaching me softly. >> It is because you always smile and you teach me softly. OR >> Did you mean: It is because you always smile and you teach me slowly.I have to a class with you. >> I have to do a class with you. You always fix my sentence,so i feel confidence about the English. >> You always fix my sentence,so I feel confident with English.Today my mom said\"Tom wants to have a class with teacher Nina\"to the manager. >> Correct! OR >> Today my mom said\"Tom wants to have a class with teacher Nina\"to the Korean manager.korean manager said \"At the Philippines don\'t watch renewal class\" >> The Korean manager said \" Teachers are not aware of their schedule of classes.\"So...You should lead me. >> Correct! Teacher Nina I like you^^!! >> Correct!With Love Tom >> Correct!

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